The Four Stanza Life of Joe Careful

19 Apr

“Nothing ventured, nothing gained.” ~Proverb

The Four Stanza Life of Joe Careful

There was a guy named Joe Careful
Who never took a risk
Who never pulled a muscle and
Who never slipped a disc

Who never asked a pretty girl
To meet him for a drink
Who never said much ‘cause he feared
What other people think

Who never tried anything new
For fear that he would fail
Who never dared to venture off
The easy, beaten trail

And that is why Joe Careful’s life
Is just four stanzas long
If only he’d taken more risks
This rhyme might be more strong

                               ~Miro

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18 Responses to “The Four Stanza Life of Joe Careful”

  1. sojourner April 19, 2012 at 10:51 pm #

    Very beautiful poem…and insightful!
    I don’t want to be like Joe Careful!
    🙂

    • Miro April 19, 2012 at 11:19 pm #

      Thank you. Neither do I! Always striving to add new stanzas. 🙂

  2. Soma Mukherjee April 19, 2012 at 10:56 pm #

    oh Miro this is so fabulous…
    specialy last stanza…marvelous 🙂

    • Miro April 19, 2012 at 11:20 pm #

      Thank you Soma!.

  3. Mike Fisk April 20, 2012 at 12:20 am #

    If Peter had never taken a risk he’d never have walked on water. The other 11 couldn’t make that claim. Great post! Mike

  4. You As A Machine April 20, 2012 at 12:38 am #

    Well done.
    Your new theme looks very nice.

  5. willofheart April 20, 2012 at 12:54 am #

    I love this poem Miro, excellent piece, thanks for sharing wisdom again…

  6. pbus1 April 20, 2012 at 2:28 am #

    I enjoyed the poem, as always. The message in this poem was strong! I like your new look too! God bless you!

    Paulette

  7. gingerfightback April 20, 2012 at 11:36 am #

    Loved it Miro – Sadly I know a few people like Joe. Wasted lives…..Cheers!

  8. Christy Birmingham April 20, 2012 at 1:07 pm #

    I read this yesterday and it certainly resonated with me. I am off to share now! I also like the new look of your blog Miro, very modern look.

  9. Cat Forsley April 20, 2012 at 3:20 pm #

    AWESOME MIRO …..
    LIFE IN ITSELF IS A GIANT RISK …….
    AMPLIFIED ————– MAGNIFIED IN MY HEART THIS ONE …..
    MUCH LOVE XX

  10. Maryanne Pale April 22, 2012 at 6:13 am #

    I enjoyed reading this piece and had a giggle when I read the last stanza. There is so much truth behind it. Many thanks for sharing Miro 🙂

  11. lscotthoughts April 22, 2012 at 12:04 pm #

    Oh, I love this one, too, Miro…remaining in the comfort zone leaves no room for adventure and new possibilities. Your last stanza is a perfect ending! xx

  12. ansuyo April 22, 2012 at 8:55 pm #

    Awesome 🙂

  13. Sue Dreamwalker April 23, 2012 at 2:52 pm #

    Cleverly put.. and very true Miro

  14. granbee April 25, 2012 at 3:38 pm #

    Miro, this poem is very amusing, sad, profound and masterfully formed–all at the same time! I know so many people in this small Southern town like this. I feel so sad at all the joys they are denying themselves through being so very “careful”!

  15. mileventwelve May 1, 2012 at 8:36 am #

    Hello Miro! I wanted to say thanks for liking one of my posts. People who appreciate my blog inspire me more.^^

  16. Aspergers Girls May 4, 2012 at 1:40 am #

    Clever.

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